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My Poem!!!

Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
edited December 1969 in Random Issues
Hey u guys and gals!!! A very great friend of mine suggested to put a poem i wrote on tasbeha!!!! My friend said it was really good!!! I hope u like it!!!

[center]SIN
No way of coming out!!!
Trapped in my black heart!!!
No one can hear me shout!!!
It seems my soul and I are getting separated apart!!!
I can’t handle it anymore!!
My heart is getting tired and soar!!
I need to rest, to rest my mind!!
I need to rest, to rest what’s inside!!
I need to think outside the box!!
But my mind is blocked with dark stones and rocks!!
I need someone, someone to help me!!!
I need someone, but who can it be?
I still can’t figure it out,
But there is one name that I can shout!!
My Father from above,
Who shines down and spreads His love!!
He is the only one who can save me!!
He is the only one who lets me and wants me to be free!!
But does He want me after I locked Him out!!!
I don’t know what to do, but to cry and pout!!
Should I return to Him or stay in this evil dark deadly pond!!
I want to break it; I want to break this evil bond!!!
When I get away it pulls me back in!!!
But what can I say, that is why it’s called sin.
I need to get out!!!
I’ll just shout!!!
I’ll shout for Him to come and save me!!!
I’ll shout for Him to break me free!!
When He comes he’ll light the way!!
The way away from sin, so I don’t hate and stay!!
I did it, I shouted upon His name!!
He came to my rescue, because this isn’t any game.
He showed me the light, the light I needed to see!!
And He told me I can be anything I want to be!!
He cleaned my clothes, and made them white again!!
He gave me new shoes, better than the ones I had then!!
He opened His arms and said to stay!!!
I went and hugged Him and said okay!![/center]

Comments

  • Unknown
    ur amazingg woooow wat a poemm i luv this


    /
    mahraeel
    plzz p4m sister in Christ



  • Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
    [quote author=mahraeel link=topic=6097.msg81098#msg81098 date=1200614831]
    ur amazingg woooow wat a poemm i luv this


    /
    mahraeel
    plzz p4m sister in Christ





    thnx!!!!!! i'm glad u did!!!
  • amir_miro
    oh my god
    this poem is marvelous
    i like it da most
    keep goin
  • Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
    [quote author=amir_miro link=topic=6097.msg81109#msg81109 date=1200621914]
    oh my god
    this poem is marvelous
    i like it da most
    keep goin


    thnx!!!!
  • Unknown
    THIS IS ABSOTUTELY A PHENOMENAL WORK OF ART!!!!! WAY TO GO *THIRSTY+FOR+CHRIST!!

    Forever,
    Coptic Servent
  • mannanmannan
    That was nice did you write anymore??????????
  • Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
    [quote author=Coptic Servent link=topic=6097.msg81119#msg81119 date=1200656136]
    THIS IS ABSOTUTELY A PHENOMENAL WORK OF ART!!!!! WAY TO GO *THIRSTY+FOR+CHRIST!!

    Forever,
    Coptic Servent


    thnx!!!!
    [quote author=mannan link=topic=6097.msg81131#msg81131 date=1200690103]
    That was nice did you write anymore??????????

    i do have on more, but it is kind of similar to this one!!!!!!
  • copticcross3copticcross3
    really good !
    you should consider sending it to saint john or saint anthony monestary.
    (::
  • Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
    [quote author=copticcross3 link=topic=6097.msg81140#msg81140 date=1200723528]
    really good !
    you should consider sending it to saint john or saint anthony monestary.
    (::

    thnx!!!!!
  • mannanmannan
    Can you plz post it I love to read poems.
  • Basant TawfikBasant Tawfik
    [quote author=mannan link=topic=6097.msg81173#msg81173 date=1200773729]
    Can you plz post it I love to read poems.

    sure i'll call the post My Poem #2!!!! ok!!??
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