Poem #4!!!

Basant Tawfik

Hey u guys!! I have another poem for u guys to read!! If u don't understand it tell me!! ok!!?? I had some people not get it!!! ok!!?? here it is!!

Satan!!!
Tears slide down my face!
Hope and life, there is no trace!
Against me the world has turned!
And with it I got burned!
I hate the world and everything in the world!
My heart is like fire not white and pearled!
Hatred flows through my mind!
And with it I am blind!
But what can I do, there is no way!
I wish I can get out but I have to stay!
I lie,
and I hate!
I cry,
and with fear I shake!
There is no safety anymore!
I hate my life it is such a bore!
There is someone I know!
Who makes me feel so low.
I thought he was my friend,
but he tricks me in the end.
I rely on him,
But he leads me to sin!
I want to leave him, but how?
I know there is a way, but I’ll stay with him for now!

Basant Tawfik

So i guess u guys don't like it!!??

mannan

No its good I feel that about me

Basant Tawfik

[quote author=mannan link=topic=6145.msg81565#msg81565 date=1201640681]
No its good I feel that about me


so u get it!!?? A lot of people don't get it!!

mannan

Isnt  it like you are with satan and you cant leave him bcuz its hard to stay away from sin

Basant Tawfik

[quote author=mannan link=topic=6145.msg81568#msg81568 date=1201640924]
Isnt  it like you are with satan and you cant leave him bcuz its hard to stay away from sin


ya!!! Nice job!!!

mannan

Yay thanks  :)

Basant Tawfik

[quote author=mannan link=topic=6145.msg81570#msg81570 date=1201641127]
Yay thanks  :)


ur welcome!!!