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Poem #7!!!
Hey u guys!!!! I wrote a poem for this whole entire week!! well it is about this week!!! okay!!!
Feel His Pain
Cry out His name,
because we’re to blame.
His death hour is almost near.
And the vision of His pain is very clear.
The crown of thorns that He will wear,
and the pain that hurts that He can’t share.
He will carry all the sins of the world.
And He will rise from the dead as we’ve been told.
He did nothing wrong,
but out of love He stayed strong.
Risking His life for me and you.
Risking His life for the whole world too.
The cross He had to carry throughout the way.
And on earth He was never welcomed to stay.
The Jews pushed Him out as far as they can.
And the Jews thought He was only man.
With a hug and a kiss He was betrayed.
And the vision of selling Him can never fade.
Live with Him all your life so you can be happy.
And the reward in heaven will be worth it, you’ll see.
Feel His Pain
Cry out His name,
because we’re to blame.
His death hour is almost near.
And the vision of His pain is very clear.
The crown of thorns that He will wear,
and the pain that hurts that He can’t share.
He will carry all the sins of the world.
And He will rise from the dead as we’ve been told.
He did nothing wrong,
but out of love He stayed strong.
Risking His life for me and you.
Risking His life for the whole world too.
The cross He had to carry throughout the way.
And on earth He was never welcomed to stay.
The Jews pushed Him out as far as they can.
And the Jews thought He was only man.
With a hug and a kiss He was betrayed.
And the vision of selling Him can never fade.
Live with Him all your life so you can be happy.
And the reward in heaven will be worth it, you’ll see.
Comments
Please keep them coming, I enjoy reading them.
Have a blessed pascha week.
Plz pray for me
wow, very very nice. May God bless you & reward you with his Heavenly rewards.
Please keep them coming, I enjoy reading them.
Have a blessed pascha week.
Plz pray for me
thnx!!!
It's very nice, it touches and u have great talent and keep writting more poems !! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
aww thnx!!!
[move]amazingggggggggggggggg :D [/move]
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ
one worddd ;D
[move]amazingggggggggggggggg :D [/move]
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ
No ur all amazinggggggg!!!
and I still think that one day when i am browsing through the church library i will see a taraneam CD by "*Regretful+Sinner*"
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mahraeel
plzzz p4m sister in Christ
"christ our savior has come and has born suffering taht through his passion he may save us let us glorify him and exalt his name for he has done mercy according to his great mercy"
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mahraeel
plzzz p4m sister in Christ
"christ our savior has come and has born suffering taht through his passion he may save us let us glorify him and exalt his name for he has done mercy according to his great mercy"
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you are soo good! :* Keep it up!
and I still think that one day when i am browsing through the church library i will see a taraneam CD by "*Regretful+Sinner*"
Awwwwwwwwww u guys r sooooooooo nice!!!!but i don't think i will be able to make my poems into songs!!!
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ
lol thxx but jw y? if u dont fell like explaining then that is okaay but at least rite the poems lol ^_^
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mahraeel
plzz p4m sister in Christ
I will keep on riting poems, but the song thing? I don't think so!!! I am not a kind of person with rythm!!! more like feelings,but feelings thought hard, like u've read in this poem!!!
Good Job!
It was really beautiful. :)
Good Job!
Thnx!!!!
I like your poem - absolutely fantastic ;)
thnx